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This page starts with the aftermath showing how the waiting room has been demolished. That big black oval is the big honking dead gorilla. Sort of a comical post script. Panel 2 is up in the air. I have either a neat shot showing Lucy having recovered the baton from the elevator and brandishing it or showing her pulling it out of the wall. So we have Cool Shot vs Storytelling shot. So, please pick left or right, thanks! Three has Lucy exiting an elevator into a parking garage (the big trapezoid is her motorcycle). The arrows indicate I should shade or texture in such a way as to flow the eye up, over and down. Four is her mounting it and discovering an explaining plot point to further the adventure. Last panel her zooming out of the parking garage.
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A lot of revision I do this too