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So I had this thumb, but didn't go off it exactly and now I see why I didn't like the finish. There's parts I like, but there's too much wasted negative space on the finish. I also flipped the figure in the second panel. I think I'd have a back shot looking up over the shoulder to the right. I dunno. Too much thinking. Behind the figure in panel 2 is a wall that's set to crumble and then does in panel 3.

Please give feedback.
Also which is better, the one on the left or on the right?
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I think that third panel is a problem- it is one of the smaller panels on the page and the only one where action is happening. Generally it is hard to show action in a small panel like that.