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crit for L Curv

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The Good
1. Good drawing
2. Good proportions
3. Good framing of Flash with the smoke
4. Good colors
5. Good smoke

The Bad
1. Twinning; Flash's arms arm too symmetrical & stiff
2. Too vertical/up and down
3. Flash is dead center
4. Foreshortening isn't strong
5. Lots of wasted negative space

Advice
1. Have one arm moving forward and one backward creating depth, also block and cube out legs (a little stumpy). Maybe have some tendrils coming towards the reader and trailing from the direction Venom came from as well.
2. Zoom in and tilt Venom so he's slightly off center and uses up that wasted space.
3. Bend back arm for more rhythm.
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